The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Qpi0Jg8r-o
0m48s Make the sound not as high pitched
1m35s Make the act out move more jello-like
7m02s Do a more convincing lipstick fixing motion
8m47s Move my hands up for “you have that glow”
Overall: Good set with multiple applause breaks but some parts hit a lot harder than others.
Doing checks on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU_zU_N6KcI
2m28s The drunk rocking motion should be more random
Overall: Mediocre even for checks.
The 8pm show, checks dropped mid set
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NqL_pNDBJTw
2m00s The cuddling line might be too early
2m17s Sell the sarcasm harder, “I have no idea why he’s in prison”
3m30s Work on the drunk guy act out
5m20s For the hand motion, I should be between my mom and dad
10m33s Rephrase to “that other character Ben, he’s the made up one”
Overall: I was having a very good set until checks got dropped, at which point it went down to an average set.
Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM-XHZ_xRPY
0m39s Good analogy, too bad I can’t recycle it
7m18s Rephrase to “I can’t marry you”
8m04s Cut the “when sixteen” line
8m34s Cut “I did”
8m58s Rephrase to “is my lipstick smeared?”
10m04s Good riff
10m52s Make a more obvious check mark motion
12m45s Say “the glow” instead of “a bit of glow”
Overall: Weaker than usual here, but I had some good improvised lines.
A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRwaB4Aivx4
0m27s Try a different sound for the radar
0m42s Do the beeping sound at myself
4m26s Change it to “I can’t marry you”
5m07s The joke needs an end
5m24s Cut “I did”
5m49s Do a better lipstick fixing motion
Overall: Good for a mic. Act outs could be stronger.
