Performance Critique: May 21

Going up towards the end of the 7pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Ibg7PtP2OF8

0m10s No need to acknowledge that laugh

1m31s Try “go study” instead of “do your homework”

4m34s Open eyes wider

5m29s Try “jerk” instead of “asshole” it’s fewer syllables, same idea

Overall: Slightly slow start but good set.

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