Performance Critique: May 1a

Saturday open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cF0gqefuNT0

0m33s Cut this joke

1m22s Act out each picture being shown with some motion

1m37s Slow down, a lot

3m33s The first part of the Netflix joke is good, then it’s useless until the “scratched” line

Overall: I need to slow down on the vacation photos joke and the Netflix joke will be good if I get rid of the middle part.

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