The Sunday writer’s mic

0m45s If you’re watching this video, just fast forward to here. Editing critique: Trim the fat around my sets

0m52s The comic before me ended his set by being in his underwear

1m25s This joke was way funnier when I thought of it in the shower earlier that day

2m18s This whole joke needs to be a lot clearer

2m47s Kill this joke

3m18s Decent setup, terrible punch line, rework it

4m22s No more redbull joke

Overall: All of my newer jokes need rewriting or deletion. The suicide joke is golden.

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