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Performance Critique: April 30

A Friday Night Benefit Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwCrQq6uA-0

1m01s Make a bigger arm motion and bigger facial expression

2m47s That’s one of the funniest responses I’ve ever heard from an audience member

4m23s The mom act out should’ve been angrier

5m11s Good job waiting for them to laugh after “Jehovah’s witnesses”

5m52s Cut the “pamphlet” line

6m36s I should learn to not do the rest of this joke if “perfect” doesn’t get a big laugh

7m05s Bad save line in this situation

7m11s Luckily the Carrot Top line saved the set from ending terribly

Overall: I had a great first 6 minutes and a terrible last minute. The big thing I learned is, if you’re doing a benefit show for some medical charity, avoid suicide and abortion jokes. (Yes, this is obvious in retrospect.)

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