Category: Comedy

Doing the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tISlqynbsgc

0m22s Good improv to start

2m39s Cut that tag

Overall: Solid set

Opening for an improv group

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HmJERRWOfPk

1m10s Hit the line harder

4m14s Turn to the side for this line, make it more of an aside

5m26s Cut the word “so” at the start, it’ll seem more random

Overall: Eh, weak but steady laughs.

Going last 2.5+ hour into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjRQsuBm7s4

0m46s Respond better with something like “I love that you don’t dispute it”

4m01s Don’t pause mid sentence

4m17s Move my eyes side to side, not my head

4m44s Go straight to “I just got back from” without restating what he said

6m33s Push the mic forward on the punch line

7m01s First say, “she’s cute, good job sir.”

Overall: Weak steady-ish laughs. Connect better at the start.

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7t1Ms5Z1bY4

0m22s Milk the face for a little longer

1m17s Pause for another half beat before “it won’t be”

1m40s Say “disputing” instead of “arguing”

5m38s Good improvised line

6m05s Go forward with the mic stand instead of putting my arms out

Overall: The second half was a little better than the first half, but neither was that good.

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8CG3FtGExQ

0m58s Cut this rod line

1m22s Cut this responsibility line

3m53s If I’m gonna do this, I need to talk about my views of marriage first

Overall: Eh, working out newer stuff