Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPlchmtOivY
1m07s Say “she’s cute, good job sir”
1m14s First joke missed horribly
2m02s I should know better than to do characters during a check spot
3m55s Don’t say the “that deserved more” line if I’m not doing well
7m05s Roll with the response better
7m54s Stop holding the mic stand for no reason
Overall: Pretty weak, even for a check spot.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48JkrD4Agvc
2m54s Reverse the words to “she calls me up right after like”
5m56s Say “she’s cute, good job sir”
6m56s Don’t say it so forced, and say it smoother
7m15s Slow down between “P” “H” and “D”
Overall: Really good set with strong laughs throughout. The mom dancing bit was the weakest one, and it didn’t help that I stumbled my words during the setup.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8tjimnw3Zew
1m28s Add “because” before “it has coodies”
5m01s If they agree that quickly, point it out right away
7m38s Do the “wave through” motion for a little longer
Overall: Average check spot, a few good laughs in between being ignored most of the time
Late night music and comedy for a few people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZ1qBuL5Ejc
2m59s Talking less loud actually sometimes works
7m39s Have a better response next time
9m47s Say “yeah” a little more convincingly
Overall: The jokes hit so so, but I did a good job of rolling with the interruptions/conversation and not getting thrown
An 8pm bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iRLtxVSDoQ
1m43s Turn to a different direction for “I love that he’s not disputing it”
2m59s Point it out to the rest of the crowd, not to the person
4m51s Try just moving the eyes, without moving the head
5m09s Smile bigger
6m08s Get rid of the “dah-dah-dah-dah”
7m35s Nice improvised little bit
Overall: Good set, newer mom bits worked decently well
