Category: Comedy

Doing a longer set for an eight person show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1xsq84XLfs

2m54s Keep my eyes more open

7m31s Try “probably” means “hopefully”

7m42s I could’ve dug deeper into their first time

13m42s Move hands apart a little slower

17m59s Pause for another second and stare at everyone as the mom character before talking

18m49s Try “you know what mom” instead of “oh mom”

Overall: On an absolute scale this was a bad set, but considering the audience response to the previous acts, I did very well.

Going first at an open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SikuwHTyJ_Q

0m35s Say “fresh breath” not “clean breath”

2m38s Interesting that the act out got more laughs the longer I did it, maybe I should skip to the later half of it

4m45s Word the car line better

Overall: Good for a mic. Keep working on the drunk act out.

An open mic with 8 comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rPaQXWvM864

0m56s Hit woah harder

5m59s More sarcasm in the delivery

Overall: Weak mic response but it’s interesting that I’m trying to do a very long minute act out.

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcKTSjI8gRo

0m27s Always nice to open by commenting on whatever the host and previous comic said

0m44s Say “fresh breath” instead of “clean breath”

5m28s Try “fun fact” instead of “did you know”

6m08s There’s a window and people were there

9m00s Good job commenting on the sound

11m07s Cut the word “probably”

Overall: Great set, I was in the moment the whole time and jumped between jokes and audience interaction.

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0dpT5a0TdI

2m22s Stumble around more

3m45s This is a reminder to not do long act outs during checks

5m17s If saying someone is my favorite, tell the rest of the crowd to step it up

5m31s Hit “people” harder

6m44s The risk of asking the audience, if they don’t respond clearly it ruins the start of your joke

Overall: Weak even for a check spot. First joke hit and it was mostly downhill from there.