The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnBsQyaGhpk
0m47s Good correction
1m39s This sound works better than the previous one I was trying
4m51s Move my eyes more than my head
5m31s Sell the sarcasm of “no idea” harder
8m57s Sound happier about the box
9m24s Nice that the positioning gets a laugh without words
10m20s Do the hands by the face
Overall: Good set with steady laughs and a couple of applause breaks, but it could’ve been a lot stronger.
Doing the check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VAqrAbAtRg
0m35s The “beep” and the longer sound should have the same basis
2m25s Good response
5m13s Add “to home”
6m50s Say “That reminds me how I got…” to make it more conversational
Overall: Very good for checks. I didn’t even have to acknowledge that they were being dropped.
An open mic with ten comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pNUmv-jiG5s
1m59s Get a consistent sound
3m42s Change the cadence for the women’s prison line
4m22s This needs a different ending
Overall: Eh. Some things went relatively well.
An open mic with 6 comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpAb5alDrDE
1m25s Get a consistent sound for the disappoint-dar to make the callback easier
5m13s Don’t go up on “comedy”
Overall: Eh weak response.
Late night music and comedy
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p6GriqN1V3A
0m48s I didn’t plan to open with this joke, but it was part of the conversation
4m02s Keep my eyes open during this act out
5m12s At least calling out the situation got a big laugh
5m59s Clean up the wording
6m06s Missed an opportunity to address the “oh man” and play along with her
Overall: Eh. I usually do better here.
