The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zJCw-Mq-hWw
1m21s Sell the looking down and swallowing harder
2m16s Nice acknowledgement
4m10s Pause for another half second after “black”
8m49s Say “she’s cute” before “you did a good job”
9m31s Dart my eyes around while waiting for the laughs
Overall: Solid set.
A bar show for six or eight people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YVQ8e9PAdRQ
0m35s Not sure why I started with this bit
1m35s And I should never start with this bit again, or if I do, come out as the character
1m48s At least I realized it right after
3m38s No need to be condescending, it’s not their fault I started with a bit I shouldn’t start with
5m31s There’s a reason I haven’t done that joke in a year
8m47s At least my save line works
Overall: Horrible set. Don’t open with Blade.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KfjoNuJRokQ
0m11s Riffing off the last comic’s material
3m27s Good improvised call back to a riff
Overall: Great three minute rant in the middle.
A hostel show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FBDE3_-NQ50
1m00s Lean harder and move the mic more on the punch line
1m15s That’s not what happened, get out of my head
6m08s Try moving just my eyes, without moving my head
Overall: Weak set. The first minute went well until I addressed a joke missing. Do at least 2 or 3 minutes before analyzing/addressing that stuff.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLtZh4O_esI
0m38s Don’t sound so depressed at the start, even if it’s a mic
1m48s Consider cutting “it has coodies”
3m15s Don’t stutter during the statement at all.
Overall: Average low mic response. I should listen to myself and take a few days off.
