Category: Comedy

A bar show for 15 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lwr5sVpF7go

0m14s Don’t even acknowledge that it missed this early on

1m25s No need for “I know” either skip it or say “I knew it”

3m29s Nice line, look for someone with parents there to get an extra laugh in the future too

5m21s Make “it won’t be” more sing-songy

6m08s At least it’s a strong save line

6m14s Don’t acknowledge the save response

8m20s Try not to over stutter

Overall: Mediocre to average. A few big laughs too many small laughs.

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=82Vg8NStYxA

8m42s Dart my eyes around more when in the character

Overall: Good for a check spot.

Headlining a coffee shop show in NJ for 15 or so older people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJ1uqoyvZQU

9m09s Do the arm wave through motion for longer

10m28s I adjusted the school name I say based on where I was

10m51s After the school sweatshirt/halfway to a diploma, I could’ve added “that’s how I got half my credits”

13m12s Pause another half second after “black”

17m20s I should get off stage here on an applause break

Overall: Very solid 18 minute set in front of an audience I wasn’t sure would like me.

The 9pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQ4mc_S6ujk

6m03s Nice improv line

Overall: Solid set with consistent laughs throughout.

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCvfySq3HTg

1m41s Say “she’s cute” first

6m36s Smile bigger even if it doesn’t hit

10m46s One too many Blade bits in a row

11m18s Brought them back at least

12m31s Do the hand motion as well

Overall: Really good set. The iphone throw joke was the weakest part.