Category: Comedy

Late night music and comedy, with a birthday party group chatting in the back

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bY6ulHgIvhA

0m38s Good riff to start

1m11s Emphasize “I’m” in that sentence

1m21s Emphasize “your”

5m15s Work on the wording for that

7m12s I should try a little more to control the talking

8m14s Nice delivery on that line

9m05s Don’t need that last line

Overall: Eh. I was so focused on working out my new stuff that I didn’t put in as much effort into controlling the crowd as I should’ve.

Doing a check spot

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2t4HweeOkqY

1m08s I mixed up where “shoes” and “hair” go, ruining the joke

1m25s Can’t do the “you look like you disappointed your parents” line if the previous line totally misses, do something less aggressive first

2m25s Decent job of going with the “audience participation”

3m15s Say “you’re my favorite audience member” instead of “my kind of girl”, it’s a stronger version

Overall: Ok for a check spot, not great

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XJSsXWt7e_w

0m52s Have a more specific posture for the friend

1m32s Say the sentence without pausing in the middle

2m15s Say “steady” before “sex supply”

3m22s Try “lone” instead of “only”

3m40s Make this punchier

5m33s Try saying the last one in my mom’s accent

Overall: Weak to mediocre mic response. Working out new jokes.

Doing a 9:30 show, with more audience than usual

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cf6XOTPF-8w

0m48s Go bigger with the pointing motion

1m21s Go bigger with the pointing motion

1m34s Don’t use the words “today at work”

2m37s Draw out “I’m kidding” a little longer/softer

4m22s Come across my body on the pointing

6m08s This is a new twist to an old joke, gotta find the best wording for it

6m48s Add “cause you’re all uptight”

7m08s Put more emphasis on “AND”

7m53s Don’t stop on the laughs

8m33s Nice end on the joke

Overall: Great set. I messed around with the audience and would lose them a little but then bring them right back stronger. And I also got 3 or 4 big laughs from a two day old bit, so there’s lots of potential there.

Opening the 8pm show. Video starts 2 minutes into the set because I didn’t set it up in time

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jt9Kvtp2hg

1m47s Weird delivery in “I was in the baggage check”

3m18s Good improvising

4m38s Good interaction

5m27s Good save to a weird ending of a joke

6m31s Move the mic away faster so they know to ask “why”

9m00s Add a “sir” at the end of it to make it less harsh

Overall: The jokes were hit or miss by the crowd interactions were very solid.