Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=82Vg8NStYxA
8m42s Dart my eyes around more when in the character
Overall: Good for a check spot.
Performance Critique: July 8
Headlining a coffee shop show in NJ for 15 or so older people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJ1uqoyvZQU
9m09s Do the arm wave through motion for longer
10m28s I adjusted the school name I say based on where I was
10m51s After the school sweatshirt/halfway to a diploma, I could’ve added “that’s how I got half my credits”
13m12s Pause another half second after “black”
17m20s I should get off stage here on an applause break
Overall: Very solid 18 minute set in front of an audience I wasn’t sure would like me.
Performance Critique: July 6
The 9pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQ4mc_S6ujk
6m03s Nice improv line
Overall: Solid set with consistent laughs throughout.
Performance Critique: July 2
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCvfySq3HTg
1m41s Say “she’s cute” first
6m36s Smile bigger even if it doesn’t hit
10m46s One too many Blade bits in a row
11m18s Brought them back at least
12m31s Do the hand motion as well
Overall: Really good set. The iphone throw joke was the weakest part.
Performance Critique: July 1
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zJCw-Mq-hWw
1m21s Sell the looking down and swallowing harder
2m16s Nice acknowledgement
4m10s Pause for another half second after “black”
8m49s Say “she’s cute” before “you did a good job”
9m31s Dart my eyes around while waiting for the laughs
Overall: Solid set.
