Category: Comedy

Going last 2.5+ hours into the show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ehwPO1bxdE0

4m14s Great delivery on this line

Overall: Great set and my new joke ended the set fairly strong.

A second 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=po79kXaJqzo

2m10s Nice improvising

5m45s Nice for a new joke to work

8m13s Take a slight pause after “screw the steady supply of sex”

10m21s Lean forward more authoritatively on this line

Overall: Great set. Two new bits worked and I had a lot of fun with crowd interactions.

A 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7fNemqm_jI

3m35s No need for “sir” at the end of the sentence

4m18s Cut the word “outstanding”

5m18s Do the radar thing on myself if I’m gonna bother to set it up

Overall: Decent set, the new alimony joke worked but didn’t hit as hard as the other stuff

The Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGf3v0MphR8

3m30s Combine the cops and the mugger into one thing

Overall: Ok for a mic.

The 8pm Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVBG9byyvEE

1m53s Instead of just repeating “disappointdar” say “disappointdar works like this”

9m05s Nice to end a new joke on a decent laugh

Overall: Good set. Did some newer material that went over decently.