Category: Comedy

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fC1RQdIiY0E

3m28s Enunciate “love” more

4m44s There might be a better word than “sadness”

5m37s Add a few words, “then a year later, it turns into…”

6m35s Reword the tizzy to something that’s a closer parallel to a marriage argument

7m38s Great yet horrible improvised line, figure out a way to put it into the act

8m01s Say “too fast” not “too far”

8m18s Change the delivery on “I know, right” like it’s the most obvious thing in the world

9m05s Every night should be at the start of the sentence

Overall: Good set, first seven minutes of pretty new material went really well. Could’ve ended stronger.

Going last two plus hours into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NI3TxpRf-o8

2m51s I could’ve gone off script more and made fun of him for feeling the need to yell out his school

Overall: Decent but not great. Steady-ish laughs throughout.

Going up 2.5 hours into the show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JV0B-UvJiGY

1m18s First time that’s gotten an applause break

1m27s Good job milking the situation

3m14s Weird non segue

3m25s Weirder interruption

6m18s Weak ending. I should’ve done another mom joke since the other one hit so well.

Overall: First half was great, second half was so so.

Another mic, with terrible lighting

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tv9jJfjGiPg

2m49s More emphasis on “I’m”

6m44s Good improvising, could’ve reacted slightly sooner

Overall: Average mic response

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i0dAfU7YFs0

1m35s It should be “buddy” not “friend” cause that’s what I said earlier

2m48s Reword to “but he doesn’t take anything cause he realizes those Kazaam DVDs…”

3m16s Make the whole sentence past tense

3m29s Decent improvised tag

4m41s Change the hand motion to something else

4m55s Change “brag” to “show off”

Overall: Good for a mic. The new marriage bit went over decently well.