Category: Comedy

Doing a check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgPDPwiV0gg

Overall: Good for checks.

Doing a check spot on the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3rja3f9VX8

0m31s Weird joke to open on

0m38s Good improvised save lines

2m30s Smile a little on that line

5m43s Forgot to do the “phd in art history and a post doctorate degree in child abandonment” line first

Overall: Good for checks.

Going last at 2am at a music/comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0ph31Pgzt0

0m40s Add a “he blew out his arm” reference

5m50s Point at self during the whole line

6m48s Add emphasis on “after”

9m47s No need for “fundraisers” end the sentence at “synagogues”

Overall: Weird set, mostly weak with a couple of good laughs.

Doing a check spot two hours into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nJWwc3NeobU

1m22s Could’ve played up sexual tension between siblings as a response

3m02s Could’ve asked an audience member if they had siblings, to make a smoother transition into the next bit

4m57s Change “immigrant” to “foreigner” and smile on the line

Overall: Average weak check spot response.

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88yDMSOrBbg

0m50s Smile on the foreigners line

3m48s Say Shaq not Celtics, that’s not a ready association, or better yet, don’t say anything at all

5m26s Maybe slight reword to “cause I WANNA look pretty in a white dress”

Overall: Okay for a mic