A second 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=po79kXaJqzo
2m10s Nice improvising
5m45s Nice for a new joke to work
8m13s Take a slight pause after “screw the steady supply of sex”
10m21s Lean forward more authoritatively on this line
Overall: Great set. Two new bits worked and I had a lot of fun with crowd interactions.
A 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7fNemqm_jI
3m35s No need for “sir” at the end of the sentence
4m18s Cut the word “outstanding”
5m18s Do the radar thing on myself if I’m gonna bother to set it up
Overall: Decent set, the new alimony joke worked but didn’t hit as hard as the other stuff
The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGf3v0MphR8
3m30s Combine the cops and the mugger into one thing
Overall: Ok for a mic.
The 8pm Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVBG9byyvEE
1m53s Instead of just repeating “disappointdar” say “disappointdar works like this”
9m05s Nice to end a new joke on a decent laugh
Overall: Good set. Did some newer material that went over decently.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O98nzhrTCkI
0m25s Fingers on my left hand should be wiggling more
2m25s The super soft whisper gets a bigger laugh
4m38s My face should be looking up higher
5m10s Seem happier
5m48s The thesaurus joke needs to be cut or reworded
7m28s The actually love line isn’t needed to go into this, do it after the twice the neglect joke instead
8m48s This joke is still noticeably weaker than the first five minutes
Overall: Ok but not great. I did too many newer jokes in a row in the middle and ruined momentum.
