The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTgaqwW0Yq0
0m53s Add an “oh yeah, well” before “your shoes are stupid”
6m00s Good line I haven’t used in a while
6m08s This joke is a little rough without the “twice the neglect” joke first
7m58s Say “kazaam” instead of “Gigli”
Overall: Decent set, the last joke didn’t hit as hard the rest though. Go back to doing it the old way.
Going up at 2am on a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fUeg1sp13rk
1m05s Get to this quicker
3m45s Do the cycles in sync in a girl voice
4m08s Put my hand through my hair as I say this
6m53s “Mistress to be named later” is a keeper
11m15s Reword “you’re twenty seven, why does your mom still list you as a dependant?”
14m21s Good improvisation
15m35s I should figure out how to always have this much fun on stage
Overall: Fun late night set. Decent response considering the low number of people there.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4gAA9ZST2tg
0m53s Cut the two lines between “look inside yourself”
2m23s Go back to using Kazaam, that seems to work better
5m04s Say “renewable contracts” first, then “if you wanna be all positive”
6m08s At least the save line works
Overall: Weak even for a mic, but at least my save lines are strong.
Doing the check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9u2Z5Ue0Ejo
1m15s Address the one group talking sooner
2m26s Either don’t comment on it or make it funnier
6m43s Say “I know, right” instead of “yeah” to respond to “what?”
7m03s At least a rarely used save line worked well
Overall: Poor even for a check spot. Although the couple of front tables that were paying attention were laughing, I wasn’t able to bring most of the room in to my set.
The tail end of an 8pm show for about twenty people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YIkNyL3341c
1m43s Nice improvised line
2m55s Good job addressing the interruption and then bringing it back to my material
Overall: Great short set. I improvised off the crowd and the newest version of the “we’re not friends” call back is starting to work.
