Category: Comedy

Going last two plus hours into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NI3TxpRf-o8

2m51s I could’ve gone off script more and made fun of him for feeling the need to yell out his school

Overall: Decent but not great. Steady-ish laughs throughout.

Going up 2.5 hours into the show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JV0B-UvJiGY

1m18s First time that’s gotten an applause break

1m27s Good job milking the situation

3m14s Weird non segue

3m25s Weirder interruption

6m18s Weak ending. I should’ve done another mom joke since the other one hit so well.

Overall: First half was great, second half was so so.

Another mic, with terrible lighting

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tv9jJfjGiPg

2m49s More emphasis on “I’m”

6m44s Good improvising, could’ve reacted slightly sooner

Overall: Average mic response

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i0dAfU7YFs0

1m35s It should be “buddy” not “friend” cause that’s what I said earlier

2m48s Reword to “but he doesn’t take anything cause he realizes those Kazaam DVDs…”

3m16s Make the whole sentence past tense

3m29s Decent improvised tag

4m41s Change the hand motion to something else

4m55s Change “brag” to “show off”

Overall: Good for a mic. The new marriage bit went over decently well.

The 8pm show for 15 people or so

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mArRG9P-_BI

2m04s Go into questioning her wohoo more, “do you like to be intimidated by parental figures, or what?”

4m04s Say the line a little softer

7m01s More emphasis on “and”

Overall: Good consistent set, nothing amazing though.