Category: Comedy

Hosting the midnight show (still with bad audio)

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYD1oDezmSM

1m57s Nice improvised response

4m03s Try to understand it again, or repeat it with “I bet you use computers doing (mumble)”

6m36s Don’t pause after “you’re right, you’re right”

7m20s Asking “is your sister married” would be a better here

8m55s Could’ve done a save line to get a bigger laugh before bringing up the first comic

9m21s Don’t pause after “junkie”

10m12s Good job going out of material, sucks that I didn’t get to the big punch line on that joke though

Overall: Decent MCing but not great. Could’ve done more crowd work.

A 10pm show (camera is about 70 feet back and there’s music from a bar, so sound is less than ideal)

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OL8cn8inUas

6m05s Nice new line explaining Kazaam, should fix the joke

9m25s Two save lines in a row don’t make sense

9m32s I had a decent enough laugh that I didn’t need to do either of those save lines

Overall: Good set. Last twenty seconds could’ve been stronger though.

Hosting an open mic with no working microphone

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TIbN1kuE2yc

2m56s Hit the line without pausing

5m18s Get the line out without pausing

5m27s Good idea to end on a joke proposal

Overall: Ok for hosting a mic, work on saying some of the lines smoother

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfs_FhU4V2c

0m22s Nobody seemed high, not sure why I said that

2m53s Nice improvising

5m43s Wait another half second before doing the smile

7m22s Add a “so” at the start of the sentence

Overall: Good but not great set. I did get stronger as the set went along.

The 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBuOXGU9HUE

0m44s Add “oh yea, well” before the “your shoes are stupid”

5m49s Good way of dealing with talking

7m03s Sound happier on these lines

7m50s More emphasis on “your”

10m35s That did get weird, not sure why I went there

10m44s Nice save

Overall: Really solid twelve minute set. A couple of parts of jokes missed but I never lost the crowd and had fun.