The 8:30 show for ten or so audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x7G2_9by3Es
0m34s Change the voice to be more kid like, and not mentally challenged
3m08s This isn’t the spot for her to say “Ben”
4m18s Also not a good spot for her to say “Ben”
4m36s Try doing the call back in a little kid’s voice
Overall: Ok set. The new bit at the end went well but I need to work on the voice/expressions for the little girl and figure out the call back.
Going last at an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbPAv4oB8oE
1m43s Don’t say “gotta” twice in the same sentence
4m32s Give a better lick
4m52s Commit to the snip motion
Overall: Good for a mic. Wife like cell phone bit needs work.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r3RObOxm4JI
0m12s Weird comment to start, try not to start so negative even at a mic
1m02s Sound more excited about this
1m45s Say “emergency” more sarcastically
2m20s Do a better air lick
3m05s This should be objectifying women, not misogyny, it’s different
3m26s Nice new tag on the poetry save line
Overall: Weak response, even for a mic
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bOR0gxdonQo
0m50s Great response on a new opening joke
1m14s Do the face a little sooner
2m28s I could’ve done the regular stuff as the response was fine up to now
3m12s Nice little comment
5m01s It should be “you’re great” or if saying “I’m” do it in a voice
5m58s Don’t go up at the end of the sentence
Overall: Good set especially considering I was pissed off at the crowd at the start
Going last on the 10pm show, around 12:30
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sES6iU83Nt0
7m18s Cut the thousand DVDs credit line
9m41s Say “someone isn’t laughing” clearer to setup the next line better
Overall: Respectable set for going this late in the show with half the audience gone. I had some fun improvising with the crowd towards the start.
