A 10pm show (camera is about 70 feet back and there’s music from a bar, so sound is less than ideal)
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OL8cn8inUas
6m05s Nice new line explaining Kazaam, should fix the joke
9m25s Two save lines in a row don’t make sense
9m32s I had a decent enough laugh that I didn’t need to do either of those save lines
Overall: Good set. Last twenty seconds could’ve been stronger though.
Hosting an open mic with no working microphone
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TIbN1kuE2yc
2m56s Hit the line without pausing
5m18s Get the line out without pausing
5m27s Good idea to end on a joke proposal
Overall: Ok for hosting a mic, work on saying some of the lines smoother
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bfs_FhU4V2c
0m22s Nobody seemed high, not sure why I said that
2m53s Nice improvising
5m43s Wait another half second before doing the smile
7m22s Add a “so” at the start of the sentence
Overall: Good but not great set. I did get stronger as the set went along.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBuOXGU9HUE
0m44s Add “oh yea, well” before the “your shoes are stupid”
5m49s Good way of dealing with talking
7m03s Sound happier on these lines
7m50s More emphasis on “your”
10m35s That did get weird, not sure why I went there
10m44s Nice save
Overall: Really solid twelve minute set. A couple of parts of jokes missed but I never lost the crowd and had fun.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTgaqwW0Yq0
0m53s Add an “oh yeah, well” before “your shoes are stupid”
6m00s Good line I haven’t used in a while
6m08s This joke is a little rough without the “twice the neglect” joke first
7m58s Say “kazaam” instead of “Gigli”
Overall: Decent set, the last joke didn’t hit as hard the rest though. Go back to doing it the old way.
