Going last at an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbPAv4oB8oE
1m43s Don’t say “gotta” twice in the same sentence
4m32s Give a better lick
4m52s Commit to the snip motion
Overall: Good for a mic. Wife like cell phone bit needs work.
Performance Critique: September 11
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r3RObOxm4JI
0m12s Weird comment to start, try not to start so negative even at a mic
1m02s Sound more excited about this
1m45s Say “emergency” more sarcastically
2m20s Do a better air lick
3m05s This should be objectifying women, not misogyny, it’s different
3m26s Nice new tag on the poetry save line
Overall: Weak response, even for a mic
Performance Critique: September 10
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bOR0gxdonQo
0m50s Great response on a new opening joke
1m14s Do the face a little sooner
2m28s I could’ve done the regular stuff as the response was fine up to now
3m12s Nice little comment
5m01s It should be “you’re great” or if saying “I’m” do it in a voice
5m58s Don’t go up at the end of the sentence
Overall: Good set especially considering I was pissed off at the crowd at the start
Performance Critique: September 9b
Going last on the 10pm show, around 12:30
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sES6iU83Nt0
7m18s Cut the thousand DVDs credit line
9m41s Say “someone isn’t laughing” clearer to setup the next line better
Overall: Respectable set for going this late in the show with half the audience gone. I had some fun improvising with the crowd towards the start.
Performance Critique: September 9a
MCing the 8pm show for 11 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33Ha81KlbSM
1m42s Find out more about why he has all that equipment
2m22s Cut the “man, woman, human” line
2m48s Ask them what they’re studying
3m05s Say “white collar” right away instead of explaining it first
3m27s Ask more about “TV” stuff
7m48s Decent justification
11m05s Doing time between comics
12m03s Add “hope you got a prenup”
12m38s Say “don’t remember” instead of “not familiar”
Overall: It was a tiny crowd and didn’t get many laughs but I kept the energy positive. I also need to dig deeper into the crowd work and get a second and third back and forth instead of just learning surface information.
