The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4sQlhzyT1k
0m17s Do “hey” for a second longer
5m08s Checks starting to get dropped
7m44s Good line to set it up
7m54s Good delivery on the hair cut line
9m19s Best the birthday bit has gone to date
10m28s Look up more on the hair line
Overall: Great set. Checks got dropped halfway through but I still got strong laughs and the new birthday material is really coming together.
The 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u0wy9Gu1JMg
0m15s Take another half second on “hey”
5m09s I should comment how the safe word will be a temporary reprieve, it’s not gonna stop the sadness
Overall: Eh. Not terrible but not great.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fY4UmSK5RSM
0m15s Do the “hey” nicer and for a little longer
4m40s Good improvising off their response
5m50s Nice to see that the “punch lines are for amateurs” line works on a real crowd too
7m33s I need to make three very distinct physicalizations for the three characters
Overall: Good but not great. I need more practice with the birthday stuff and to trim the words a little.
Super late night (3:30am) at a music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pk2zfQH2IJQ
1m01s I’ve had this line for a week, gotta try it a real show now
2m01s This needs an actual punch line
2m23s Before responding, add “and I’m like”
2m55s Do the right hand motion there, don’t go wide
5m25s Deliver the haircut line in a more throw away manner
7m46s Not sure about keeping the slogan
8m24s Jump as I say “cannon ball”
8m37s Point outwards on “most people” not to myself
Overall: Good set for the middle of the night. The new birthday material is almost there but needs a little more work.
Doing a short audition set
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zQ_tFVVroK8
3m53s Nice when I can reuse an improvised line from a few weeks ago
5m24s Turn a little more on “looking over your shoulder”
Overall: Great set. Consistent laughs throughout and I ended on an applause break.
