Category: Comedy

Another mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1qMrV3OqCw

1m28s I need a better line for when someone doesn’t have a safe word

2m02s Point out that he must really love food

3m10s Might have room to say something else about the photo as an extra laugh

4m24s Emphasize “which” harder

4m35s Don’t say “a” before “pink slip”

5m08s The look on my face when the MC cuts me off is pretty hystiercal

Overall: Good for a mic. I need to figure out stock lines for when the person doesn’t have a safe word. Also, this is the first time I ever got cut off mid joke because I was slightly over time, which was interesting.

A feedback mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=348SfzEyd30

3m05s Don’t say “five minutes” twice, just do it at the end of the conversation

4m25s Don’t pause before “cake”

4m33s Add “all the” before “enthusiasm”

6m16s Don’t stumble over the words

6m27s Voice should be a little raspier

6m48s Maybe try “I won’t yell out pink slip”

Overall: Standard weak mic response. Keep working out the newer stuff.

A bar show for 8-10 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC7rgXigvSs

2m18s Good job going with it and then “improvising” to a bit I have

2m28s Best the thesaurus joke ever did, cause it seems like I just made it up

2m49s Emphasize the “f” in birthday since they already pointed it out

5m54s Stretch out the “umm”

6m15s Go even less enthusiastic on the song

6m24s I didn’t mention any statistics, so the line doesn’t make sense

Overall: Ok set. The part when interacted with the people that were whispering and worked in a bit off of it was the best part by far.

The 9:30 show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hUkI1JYJj-E

1m06s I had this idea twenty minutes before the show, and decided to try it out

2m32s If I decide to keep doing this bit, I should cut this down to three things instead of six

4m57s There might be potential in this bit

5m10s I should point out nobody would say “uptown” who actually lives in the city

6m52s Tighten this setup

7m35s Emphasis should be on “nuts” not “allergic”

Overall: Good, fun set. I tried a new concept that I thought of that day that may have potential. And the birthday bit is progressing nicely.

Doing a check spot on the 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cBlJSh0lQ9s

1m08s I had them clap since nobody was paying attention

3m08s I might as well just talk more to that guy since he was paying attention

5m54s Yell “cannonball” as I do the motion, not yell first then motion

Overall: Pretty terrible even for a check spot. After I saw that a few minutes of jokes weren’t hitting I should’ve tried going harder to crowd work.