Late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4icAO7ZLWk
3m17s Add “even with you sir”
5m14s Make “karmic wheel” into “vicious cycle”
5m45s Cut #2
6m15s Cut the word “probably”
8m54s Find a way to make that funny
Overall: Nothing special Got good practice just talking for half of the set.
MCing a 7pm bar show for 8 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IdcIH9389B4
2m33s Good job dealing with problematic sound for the first few minutes
4m34s I could pick on them not wanting to admit where they’re from
6m34s Make “I googled it” sound more like an admission of a deep dirty secret
7m00s Doing time between comics
Overall: Good job upfront. The in between time could’ve gone better.
A Mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIP3JP43eY0
0m54s Take the analogy further
1m32s Hit “I don’t have any” harder
2m42s Emphasize the word “WHEN”
4m03s More happiness on the word “joy”
4m57s Work on the woman’s voice, a little less bass
Overall: Ok for a mic.
Going up 2.5+ hours into a show for ten remaining people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mTKWhmVjV70
0m47s Say “to fix those numbers”
1m47s Nice that cannonball is working
2m08s Say “my family” instead of “myself”
3m56s It’s good to check in on the sadness, keep doing that
6m00s Stretch out the “umm”
6m57s Looks like “please drink and drive” hits stronger than “don’t drink and drive”
Overall: Ok for this long into the show.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J3DwZvhyKOE
1m17s Rip into him a little more for that
2m21s Figure out a way to change tone even if I’m reading something
4m03s Go more extreme on the poses
4m29s Rephrase to “can’t get enough of Bambi’s mother dying”
5m20s Commit stronger to the face touching
Overall: The new dating bit needs to be significantly cut down. It’s almost five minutes long now, it might be funny when it’s under two minutes.
