A show for 3 people and 10 comics
httpv://youtu.be/xPuKIMeZ3O0
0m19s Don’t put that thought in their head
1m03s I can go more self deprecating when he says it doesn’t matter
2m23s Too negative for no reason
4m28s Not sure why I got in my own head
5m26s Say “ow” the first time he gets elbowed
7m58s Decent improvised line to end
Overall: Weak set. I started out negative for no reason and didn’t get out of that mind set for the first five minutes.
Going up last 2.5 hours into the show
httpv://youtu.be/c7n2f5MQmXg
0m51s Don’t pause after “life sentence”
2m55s It did get really weird
3m38s I should get sadder on getting depression in my eye
4m38s It should be “you people” not “you guys” to emphasize the discomfort
5m35s Interesting/weird transition from two jokes I don’t usually combine
Overall: Disjointed set but good response considering it was late into the show.
A check spot
httpv://youtu.be/W_lIOiw0j-0
2m38s Nice to see the hula hoop thing works with real people
3m33s Add “baby” at the start
4m39s Twelve pack doesn’t sound good. Make it six or twenty four or just a case of beer.
5m38s That line wasn’t necessary cause I was getting laughs throughout
Overall: Respectable for a check spot.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://youtu.be/IZW4VOWei2k
1m10s Good change to the joke
1m25s Tighten this list to get to the independent woman callback faster
3m14s The last word should be “payphone”
4m22s Need to tighten that last part
Overall: Ok for a mic. Some of the new punch lines went over decently.
A very light 8pm show during a snowstorm
httpv://youtu.be/RfgPek_aaAg
0m31s The girl voice shifted back to my regular voice
3m55s Decent improvised line
4m00s I can slow down these lines
6m48s Funny idea to do “no kitty, no kitty” or whatever the safe word is like they used to do “no whammy”
Overall: Ok considering the low turn out. The birthday bit is really getting a strong response, even in small crowds.
