Category: Comedy

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/0tg7yIS4iPc

0m55s Have her look all the way up first

1m57s If an applause starts, wait for it to die down before doing the disappointdar sound

4m41s Good job addressing it

4m57s I could’ve gone into it more like “I’ll never cheat on you, unless the guy wears a green shirt” but was trying to do a specific set.

5m31s Can cut it down to “cause I sold”

6m32s The unconditional love line doesn’t hit that hard either

9m25s I can end the sentence at “online petition”

Overall: Great set.

Going up at 3am at a music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/TUfeFgqoPBY

0m46s The hand gesture for “staring at me” shouldn’t be at my stomach

5m35s Pause if there’s a laugh on the “oww”

6m07s Cut or change the haircut line

8m27s I didn’t look up and then look down. Gotta repeat the same motion as at the start.

8m40s End the line on “poetry reading”

Overall: Up and down set, lost them in the middle and the callback didn’t hit.

A 9pm show

httpv://youtu.be/sEtrhcymqDc

3m41s Jump up higher on “yay yo”

4m18s Good job calling them “sarcastic dicks” for when some of them actually cheered

5m38s React to getting elbow better

Overall: Very solid and consistent set.

A 7PM show

httpv://youtu.be/KsHMsCUrT4g

1m03s Might want to cut out “it has coodies”

5m49s Work on a better “getting elbowed” motion

6m17s Change or cut the “it wasn’t a haircut” line

7m24s Cut the “blew out the candle” line when doing this shortened version

Overall: Very solid and consistent set.

A music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/vIUzAJIaKRY

0m54s Skip the line if there’s no couple in the audience

2m16s Say “maybe” even softer

5m00s Say “meet” instead of “lunch or dinner”

Overall: Eh. Light consistent laughs.