Quick spot towards the end of the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/hKwlOfAmMBs
1m13s Cut the vote for president line
2m21s Might be fun to do a power drill sound effect
2m37s Cut the Gandhi tag
3m09s Don’t pause before “but like”
Overall: Weak short set.
Performance Critique: November 18a
MCing the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/UC-Tnq3O-z8
0m48s Guess three in a row and then go back and see about each one for accuracy
1m27s Dig more into what they do in TV
3m50s Try to give the Israeli security guy an accent
4m48s Cut the jdate part if they’re not laughing at the “smarter” jokes before that
5m24s Nice line
5m52s I can tag that with “that’s the look of, one of us needs to die already, and I don’t care which one”
7m12s Shouldn’t do the depression bit upfront when hosting
7m45s I could’ve called bullshit on that, although she had the whole name of it down
9m35s Hit “the bear” harder
Overall: Decent job MCing but could’ve been a little smoother and dug into the questions more
Performance Critique: November 17
Going up at like 2am at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/jIof44LcI28
2m55s Cut the disqualified for not being born here line and the Obama line
5m20s The addition of the gas and friend isn’t needed here
8m10s Should’ve done the eye line at the start of this bit
8m20s Cut the DMV line
8m48s The sentence should be flipped, half a face goes at the end of it
10m37s Say “kitchen” without “sink”
10m44s Last line should’ve been “I don’t know where the fourth head went either”
Overall: Ok for two in the morning.
Performance Critique: November 16
A bar show in NJ
httpv://youtu.be/QUF5pH53P-I
2m08s Repeat “power drills and wood chippers” before the home depot tag
4m00s It should be “or we’ll shoot you” not “kill you”
11m52s Don’t stumble on the line
Overall: Solid set except for where the Kazaam joke fell flat.
Performance Critique: November 15
A 9:30 show
httpv://youtu.be/avaXha-c1Fs
1m45s The insurance riff might be worth trying as an actual bit
5m58s Don’t clasp hands together on “roomfuls of strangers”
6m29s Cut the DMV line, doesn’t make sense
7m59s Hit “this is over” harder
Overall: Good set, spent two minutes riffing at the start and said a bit at the end for the first time that has potential.
