The 930 show/mic (no audience, all comics)
httpv://youtu.be/hYGXcHa_8BI
1m00s No need for the negative comment
4m11s Add “shitty” before jobs
4m41s Remember the word
Overall: Good response for a mic, keep working out the new material
Performance Critique: November 26b
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/CVmcIcJpe7I
0m59s Do a longer up and down look
2m48s Nice improvised bit here
3m29s Gotta remember the word “over-entitled”
3m59s It should be “super tough film major” not “byzantine dance”
Overall: Ok for checks, but gotta remember the word “over-entitled” and if I’m gonna do a new bit on a short set, do it earlier on so I can finish it.
Performance Critique: November 26a
Closing out the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/P-So322DE0k
0m32s Change “we are not” back to “we’re not”
1m26s Handled that curveball decently well
1m43s Restate “I can tell you’ve disappointed your parents” if I go off the cuff before saying “disappointdar”
4m38s My eyes should be looking up almost towards the ceiling
4m48s Don’t over shake the mic
5m18s Good call out
5m28s Could’ve gone into a cell phone bit because I was reminded about it
7m14s Decent place to put that
10m31s Stay in the psychotic character for an extra second after the secret
Overall: Good set but not great.
Performance Critique: November 25c
Doing a quick check spot on the 10pm
httpv://youtu.be/179kErM6Uvc
3m32s Nice call back to an improvised bit
4m14s Don’t mess up the question
Overall: Standard check spot response
Performance Critique: November 25b
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/rhmlbSTBLf8
1m02s A couple of college kids had seen perform me a bunch of times before
1m41s Try pausing for half a second before “disappointdar”
2m35s Didn’t need to address it a second time yet, at least on the video it doesn’t seem like them chiming in interrupted my flow as much as it felt at the time
5m00s The eyes don’t need to scan as quickly
6m10s It was an all Asian table
7m28s Hit “child abandonment” harder
8m10s I skipped a line about “you should make more compromises”
8m48s If someone doesn’t contribute a safe word, ask someone else. If two don’t, share mine then designate someone. The order was wrong here.
10m34s Cut the unconditional love line
12m26s Add “I’m like” before saying something
13m47s Nice little crowd interaction
13m53s Stretch out the girl’s voice on the syllables more
Part 2
httpv://youtu.be/5xxYR9ErAbw
1m12s Nice improvised callback
1m27s I could’ve added “especially those ten back there”
4m41s More emphasis on “animal”
5m44s I forgot “of sadness” and then to do “our cycles are in sync”
6m20s It’s not clear she’s holding a martini glass, play with my hair instead
Overall: Considering how much people saying my punch lines at the start threw me off mentally, I did well. I got laughs throughout this longer set and ended strong.
