The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/CvihjF76a2g
1m02s Nice little improvised comment
3m18s My favorite audience comment in a while
4m05s I could’ve worked the interaction a little more about asking what kind of job he plans on getting
8m03s No need to address the anti American thing as the last line got a good laugh
11m07s Cut unconditional love
Overall: Great set. I had fun interacting with the crowd and the material hit really hard
Going last at a music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/iUZAJOyymBQ
0m31s Put the emphasis back on “inside”
1m50s Pause for half a second before “state”
3m02s Don’t put finger down between those two lines
5m32s Funny improvised concept with “aspire”
8m37s Say “I was just as excited”
9m35s Cut the unconditional love line
Overall: Decent for last at a mic
Going first at a bar show for 6-8 people
httpv://youtu.be/T1_JJEc9cGs
0m47s I can tighten this setup to “I ran into a high school buddy”
4m31s Make it “how do you win a…”
4m49s Hit an air buzzer like I’m answering the questions for each one
Overall: Weak set, could’ve tried doing more crowd work.
An 8pm show with 20-30 audience members
httpv://youtu.be/s1OeP0Ov6BU
0m34s Works better when I point towards my heart instead of point out
3m26s Add “in this country” after “make a difference”
3m42s Don’t stumble on words
5m06s Might want to try to slow down the responses
Overall: Mediocre to okay set.
Doing a check spot
httpv://youtu.be/RjIVMzECKpA
0m08s Say “thank you” first or at least acknowledge them in some sort of fashion before going into it
1m23s Pause before “state”
3m32s When doing the tourist clubs, I can make a “that’ll be a unique souvenir” tag
4m35s Repeat whatever he said so everyone else can hear
8m28s Say “I’m allergic to nuts” with more frustration
Overall: Pretty horrible even for a check spot.
