Going up 2 hours into a show
httpv://youtu.be/7oNwLl35nHo
5m51s I could’ve gone “oh that’s the Sweden of North America”
7m02s I could milk the “oooh” for a little longer
Overall: Ok for that late in the show and after half the audience left, mediocre in the grand scheme of things.
A bar show for 12-14 people
httpv://youtu.be/9Cw8a-zwy8Y
5m51s “Shot at redemption” would be better wording
6m34s I can add “the rest of us are fucked”
7m35s Follow my hand with my eyes
8m07s Might make sense to change my hand posture to hand on hips first before calling them out, to sell being upset more
8m38s There’s a reason I usually end the act out after “forever, and ever”
11m30s It should be “used a payphone” instead of “prepay”
Overall: Decent set.
Going up on an 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/RApTXw7weVk
2m06s Say “western” instead of “west”
2m42s Add “even I had two” or something
3m59s No need for the “ov” at the end
5m19s Change the delivery/tone on “the 60’s would be an upgrade”
7m05s Don’t cover my face on that motion
Overall: Good not great, it was a little weaker at the end compared to the start.
Going up a second time on the 10pm show because someone didn’t show up
httpv://youtu.be/hfUvgFTfQj4
0m10s Went up with a fake name, could’ve had a better fake name
0m38s Got the crowd back pretty quickly
2m08s Always nice when Blade goes over well from the start
6m01s Funnier if I said “hell yeah”
7m30s Cut the dry spot, this is the weakest part of the set, try one of the other options I’ve been working
8m00s Add “not you two, you’ll last forever”
Overall: Great set, especially considering it was slightly weird that I went up there a second time.
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/tw0id_SV_SM
0m50s Cut out “over thanksgiving”
3m33s Love that this new line is getting such a big response
4m47s Good job fixing a flub
9m13s Final evidence to cut “unconditional love” as this is pretty much the only punch line that didn’t get a laugh during this set
Overall: Great set.
