Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://youtu.be/_9bJViPByao
0m33s Kiss on the mouth line doesn’t work
1m45s New part got laughs
2m45s Don’t stutter
3m33s Smile during these lines
3m42s Reword the mom line
3m49s And remember my jokes
5m14s Sound happier
7m05s Rework/tighten the Doctor Rosenfeld joke
Overall: Decent for a mic
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/0OO_XEvmHgM
2m28s Having fun with the people paying attention
4m29s I could add “let it out”
Overall: Good for checks.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/fprRPA_47Ss
4m05s Good improvised line that I can reuse
7m49s Be more outraged on “just because”
8m45s Checks getting dropped on tables and laughs stopping, the set was doing so well I thought I could go through checks without acknowledging it
10m30s At least I got a few more good laughs at the end
Overall: Great set for the first eight and a half minutes, then everyone got their checks and the laughs faded for two minutes, then I went out on a couple of good laughs.
The 8pm show for 15 people
httpv://youtu.be/GpEb5Fomz04
3m11s Nice little improvised line
8m03s Follow my hand circle with my eyes
10m13s Try “everyone got quiet cause they’re thinking “I gotta pick up some batteries on the way home”
10m44s It should be “married” instead of “wife” to make it gender neutral
Overall: Good set and good response given the small audience size.
A 10pm show with 15 or so people.
httpv://youtu.be/RLB9_G_tWVQ
0m38s Cut the “everyone else” part
2m39s More emphasis on “deserve”
4m47s Could go into how looks can be deceiving
Overall: Fun short set.
