The 8pm show for a light crowd
httpv://youtu.be/D6GEQRHqbVk
0m01s The annoying sound in the background is the heater
4m14s Pick one specific person
7m54s Say this setup slower so everyone follows
8m05s Nice when a new line gets an applause break
8m18s Change “hurt” to “injured”
8m29s Cut or rework this last line
Overall: Decent for a small crowd and a loud heater. Nice that the new part about marriages did well.
A bar show for 8-10 people
httpv://youtu.be/rL9ZVsH7fcY
3m14s Don’t backtrack, just go out of order
7m00s Should’ve pointed at the guy instead of to the side
7m44s Missed the “get it out, get it out, oh what’s the point” line
Overall: Terrible set, got two decent laughs. Should’ve done more crowd work.
A 7:30 show
httpv://youtu.be/zJb-wXBWzVE
2m06s Hit the U of Phoenix line more confidently
3m15s Might want to acknowledge the “woo”
4m52s End that more statement with more confidence instead of as a question
5m37s Pick a specific person for the line instead of “a couple of you are like”
Overall: Good short set. While it’s not that audible I had to deal with a bunch of audience interruption in the front row and that led me to change my last few jokes.
A 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/t2_r2enx9dk
0m10s Playing off what the MC said before bring me up
3m58s I shouldn’t get upset about “hundreds of dollars a month” until they laugh
5m53s That was fun improvising
6m48s Cut the “you know” from that sentence
8m29s More emphasis on “real”
Overall: Good set with some fun improvising and crowd interaction.
A show for 12 people
httpv://youtu.be/v5ltO2ASp3k
2m49s Try putting my palms face down instead of face up, it’s stronger body language
3m06s More emphasis on “hundreds”
4m59s I need a better line for when they disagree
6m43s Watch the mic cord
Overall: Weak set. I should’ve gone into more crowd work.
