The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/FIn8Yl1WD3E
2m27s Emphasize “hate” more
3m16s Emphasize “although” more
3m31s Good job reacting to the situation of someone pressing the light switch
4m40s Good call back to earlier crowd work
7m25s Don’t close with this joke, it’s too hit or miss
Overall: Ok set. Good job improvising when the lights got turned off.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/naUifa1KTSg
4m42s Delivery it happier
4m56s Good comment on it, give the girls a stat line or comment “I like how the guys are slow clapping and the girls are pissed off.”
Overall: Solid short set
Going up 2.5+ hours into a show
httpv://youtu.be/awDIAEDdCME
1m50s Good positivity about it
3m01s Enunciate “pussy” better
5m18s I can say “that’s my favorite too, maybe we’re soul mates”
6m10s Cut or completely rewrite the government thing
Overall: Good for a five person audience, last bit needs rewrites
Opening on a 4:30pm show
httpv://youtu.be/tW4kKZIIUPk
3m28s Purse my lips more like a real kiss
5m25s Do the sarcastic eye roll for longer
6m12s Say that the pastry arrives before the wish
Overall: Not great, not terrible.
Opening on a 2pm show
httpv://youtu.be/ETNDxaNDEiw
3m19s Could’ve picked the magnet guy for the cycle as a call back
Overall: Some good laughs but not amazing.
