Category: Comedy

An afternoon fundraiser

httpv://youtu.be/5r2_Kzeo9g4

0m33s Should’ve tried commenting on the room a little more

2m18s Hit “being” harder

2m45s Get more negative body language for “I see most of you are on her side”

4m22s Nice improvised line about “the Friendly’s staff”

5m41s Smile on the “awww”

6m19s Sell the “yeah right” look for longer

10m13s I should have a stock bit for when someone doesn’t have a safe word

10m59s Nice little improvised line

Overall: Ok for an afternoon set, but a lot of the jokes need shortening.

The 10pm show

httpv://youtu.be/uiaZ1BDDSBQ

0m53s I can add “and there’s more potheads than hairdressers” but they may take away from the momentum

3m55s Phone charger stuff is clearly weaker than the rest

5m36s Cut the horny line

6m41s Fun little crowd work prediction

7m08s Say “this is why” not “that’s why”

8m05s Take the extra two seconds to put the mic back in and set it up properly

Overall: Strong set but the phone charger bit needs fixing or removing

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/NiEE2mA6RG4

2m30s Pause a little after “dad had aisle” as it sometimes gets a laugh

4m08s I happened to do the kissy face to a flamboyantly gay gentleman, it made it extra funny

4m33s Rushed back into the bit for no reason

6m20s Cut the horny line

8m01s Have a slightly slower realization of “oh not you guys”

8m55s First time that callback got an applause break

Overall: Great set with big laughs throughout.

A 4pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Edto9HSc2gE

2m18s Don’t look down on “I hate delta”

3m16s Don’t pause before “of sadness”

3m32s I can smile during this part

3m48s Needs a better punch line than “like your name”

5m01s Cut the horny line

5m40s Give the “yeah right” face for longer and harder

Overall: Solid set but the laughs missed in a few lines.

Closing out the 10pm show, 2+ hours in

httpv://youtu.be/LCoQLpkHivc

1m28s I didn’t hear the “CNN” comment or I would’ve addressed it

4m22s Pause for another half second before doing a titty squeeze

5m53s Could’ve played with the comment more

6m48s Decent side commentary line

Overall: Eh, not great. Had to deal with a lot of talking.