Category: Comedy

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/GRYEgn0tITc

0m50s Make going into material feel more seamless

4m52s Good honest save line

6m06s Cut the horny line

6m34s Might be worth reusing “I’m not gonna change for you”

Overall: Average to poor.

Opening a 9:30 show

httpv://youtu.be/YMp_QNN3YQo

1m40s Could’ve added “yeah you’re not leader” or something

6m55s Feels forced there

7m35s Cut the heat line

7m58s Tighten the previous three sentences into one

Overall: Mediocre set. A couple of big laughs off of crowd work but the rest of the laughs were too low.

A 9pm show

httpv://youtu.be/HMKNao8O4DY

4m18s Pause for a second before “imagine”

5m42s Do the “yeah right” look for longer

Overall: Not great not terrible.

A bar show for 8 people

httpv://youtu.be/uDB4q9N7LSo

0m43s Sound more playful with it

1m04s Should’ve done crowd work leading into the next bit when it’s this dead

3m05s The old “if good material isn’t hitting, let’s do new material” trick

3m56s Work on that act out

4m58s Play off the heroin more since that got the biggest laugh

Overall: Horrible set that never got going anywhere. At least I said a newer joke in front of an audience.

An 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/BCJKminb7U8

3m44s Rewrite the phone charger bit

4m54s Cut the horny line (and watch my videos quicker, so I don’t have to write this same note twenty times)

5m53s Good job acknowledging something that happened and leading it into a bit

6m58s Hit “monster” harder

Overall: Weak set. Should’ve tried some save lines.