Performance Critique: November 12

This is at a bar show, with an audience of five, half of whom were comics. I was the first comic up and the “MC” didn’t do any material

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNaHzfJeaxg

0m24s I tried transitioning from professor to model, this is not a transition I’ll be keeping

1m04s I should get rid of the Clay Aiken line

1m22s The girls gone wild line needs to go too

1m41s There was only one girl in here, and she was with her boyfriend so I went with my old version of the tubes joke so it wouldn’t get overly awkward

2m32s I need to reevaluate this joke

4m14s I need a punch line after “intolerant”

5m35s I decided I should do MC like crowd work

6m03s Not sure why I looked over at a guy for “cause you know I don’t need that shit” – that’s a recipe for no laughs

6m42s My snuggle slut joke hasn’t been working well, so I tried to take the part of it I found funny and combine it with the clown story… this is a work in progress

7m54s I didn’t learn this guy was a comic until a minute after this exchange later

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bCthdvvfnLY

0m14s At least I left on a laugh

0m18s This room has each comic bring up the next comic to minimize the chances the audience leaves between comics

Overall: While it’s very hard to kill in a room of five people, I was pretty bad. I was told to treat this place as a workout room and that’s what I did: I combined my existing jokes in new ways and tried some newer stuff. The audience was low energy when I got on stage, so I decided to have slightly more energy than them, but not to get all crazy high energy (high energy level for me anyway). This was a mistake.

Performance Critique: November 10

This is a coffee house open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OnRhK5CauIs

0m12s This is a new opener I’m trying, it needs work

0m53s I love that this guy was in front of my camera for a full minute

1m18s The “please” line isn’t getting huge laughs, I might want to just have the one line intro

2m20s I should pause for an extra two seconds and look up after “I remember being on the plane” so everyone gets it

2m38s I think it’s the jehovah’s witnesses that go door to door, not the mormons…

2m54s The “intolerable” line either gets a big laugh like here, or no laugh. I need to figure out how to make this consistent

2m59s After “intolerant” I need an actual joke

3m16s It’s not true, she didn’t hug the milkman

3m22s Try doing the joke without “and it was great”

3m57s The slight stutter before “pull out” ruined the punch line

4m50s This last joke is getting retired

Overall: I did one old joke where I added a new line that worked well. I also did a lot of new material, with mixed results. I need to keep writing and tightening the material.

Performance Critique: November 7

This is the second show I produced and MCed at Caltech. Here’s my opening of the show:

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f0TEovd0x0Y

0m06s I had to make some general announcements about cell phones and such before starting the show so I decided to introduce myself. This was pretty fun to do.

0m25s There was a bunch of speakers and strobe lights around

0m37s I wrote these jokes an hour before the show

0m54s I started out with three jokes that called out the situation in the room, I think this helped a lot

1m18s Could’ve said something funnier than “he’s gonna be trouble all night”, probably a good time to start talking to him.

2m18s I went along with what was happening and called out the situation of how bad I was looking, if I had just taken my hand away without saying anything else I might’ve lost the audience right there

3m07s I went back to the old version of tubes as this crowd didn’t respond to the overly sexualized version too well last time

3m32s Good job coming back to the high five person

3m49s After watching my last time hosting this show, I consciously decided to do crowd work in between most of my bits

4m31s Some of the crowd work I had to force

6m01s I think this is a joke for comics

6m28s The tears on the map isn’t playing over well with the crowds, I might need to cut it

7m05s Always fun to force out a response

8m03s Taking a longer pause here got some laughs

8m49s Good job coming back to what has already happened in the room

9m04s I should’ve added, “you’re living the Caltech dream”

9m33s Try doing an act out with my hands when talking about “full clown makeup”

This is more from my set in the beginning

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScfklT_QZEk

0m44s I should’ve asked for his name and gone into it more

1m19s Make more of an emphasis with my hand about my stomach getting bigger

2m11s The new version of my punch line didn’t work out

2m59s The snuggle slut joke didn’t work but you can hear a comedian laughing in the background… I’m going to continue experimenting ending the set with a double call back.

This is me doing time between the first and second comic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yTXEa9ObMps

0m15s I tried referencing one of the jokes the comedian did

0m27s He only stopped grading exams for the female comedian

0m40s This is one of my best transitions from crowd work to a regular joke

This is me doing time between the second and third comic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9lN28lD30o

0m08s The comic talked about mustard so I added onto that

0m33s The standards drop usually get a laugh

1m00s That joke tanked until I called out the most likely reason they weren’t laughing

Me doing time between third and fourth comic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RJP2n4HL3Q

0m08s This was in reference to the comedienne’s opening joke of “I can’t believe I fucked Ben for this gig”

0m51s This is a great game I came up with: testing when the audience member should high five me and when he shouldn’t

1m51s No need to go back to “kicking and screaming, see how long you can hold on” if they already groan

2m14s I wasn’t planning on doing another joke, but wanted to bring up the next comic on a laugh

2m16s And that idea failed

My last time doing jokes between comics

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYVBHNgh2ZQ

0m52s Crickets

1m40s And the audience hates me, they’re at the “please bring up the next comic” stage

2m48s The audience still hates me but I at least brought them back to laughing

Overall: I did a great job of hosting up front. I had topical jokes that addressed what was going on in the room and I did pretty solid crowd work. However, the crowd turned on me for my last two bits between comedians. The lesson is: As the show goes on, do less and less jokes between the comedians. My first two “in betweens” were 75-90 seconds and received well while my last two “in betweens” were 2.5 and 3 minutes. Both of those should’ve been 45 seconds or less.

Performance Critique: November 5

This is me at an open mic mostly working out new jokes related to my dropping out of school

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vaaJ_CTQ700

0m08s Yes I’m seriously considering this as my stage name. I’ve even registered www.ProfessorBen.net (I hate that the dot com was taken).

0m29s I should use my hands more in this act out to convey emotion

0m49s This wasn’t a written part of my joke. I just called out the situation as I felt it… hopefully real crowds (aka non comedians) will laugh at the other bits of this, but if not I at least have a way to get them back.

1m34s The setup should be clearer, maybe something like “I knew I should quit grad school when I realized…”

1m41s Smile

1m47s No need to explain it

1m50s Great improvised tag about PCC (Pasadena Community College), referencing community college should become part of the joke.

2m22s Not sure if the TA opening for me bit is keepable

2m38s That was also an improvised line

2m56s I think it’s the Mormons and not the Jehovah’s witnesses that go door to door

3m09s Take a longer pause after “intolerable” before moving

3m27s This would’ve been a great time to say “wow it got really sad here again”

4m55s I had to go to one old joke because someone else talked about a topic that reminded me of it

Overall: I think this is the best response I’ve ever gotten at an open mic. While I’d like to think it’s all due to the material, I think a lot of it was due to me momentarily stopping my material in the beginning and calling out the situation of “did that get really sad for a minute?”

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