Going up 2.5 hours into a show for 8 remaining people
httpv://youtu.be/XjBmbnFW2iQ
1m18s Really no reason for that aside
2m07s Say “DAP” first then explain it
2m34s Warning the audience it’ll be rougher is a fun way to tone it down a little
3m28s I should do just talking to the audience more often
Overall: Ok for late night. The new entitlement joke needs work but has potential.
Going towards the end of the 7pm show
httpv://youtu.be/ymsrzlvfLuQ
0m30s Joke might work without the word “probably” in there
3m18s Open eyes wider for the blinks
4m39s Smile during the first two examples
Overall: On the weak side of average, had laughs but not that many big laughs
Checks during the 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/xv7xssFBDAY
3m00s At least try a save line
3m50s Say this smoothly
Overall: Horrible even for checks. Should’ve tried crowd work.
Checks during the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/SHQF9HzGf1U
2m17s It should be “don’t” instead of “didn’t”
4m39s Needs a better punch line
5m55s Cut the horny line
6m14s Say that more playfully
Overall: Great set for checks, good set without the curve
The 10pm show
httpv://youtu.be/sveeTLtvyXw
2m52s Seem more upset about it
4m05s Slight pause after “woah”
7m39s Say the “calls me up right after” line slower so I can get the mic properly adjusted
Overall: Good consistent set
