Category: Comedy

The Saturday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCwZIo0ZOs8

2m00s Doing the face and arm motion in the middle there is awkward

3m09s “Hire a hit man” doesn’t work, change the line back to “put a hit on my life”

4m48s The hair gel line isn’t that strong

Overall: Very solid set throughout. (In general, the better the set, the less comments I tend to have.) I got big laughs on most lines and medium laughs on most of the rest. The “hire a hit man” and “power of hair gel” lines need rework though.

A Saturday afternoon mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o1PB-KFGR8E

1m10s I’m talking way too fast and not pausing for laughs

1m38s I delivered it really well, but don’t crack up after doing it

3m00s It should be “and I haven’t named our future children”

3m41s I should throw in “cause usually when you know you’re going home with someone, you start doing a little dance in your head, I’m gonna get some, la la la, la la”

4m14s Add in an address after her name

5m29s Great improvised meta-joke

6m33s That save line doesn’t make sense here

7m07s Instead of “that’s the same thing” it should be “that’s the same level of gift as”

Overall: I had a lot of fun doing this mic cause of the hosts complaint about everyone doing dark stuff before I got on stage, and then I started doing dark stuff. The Yale joke is working well, the tubes joke needs to be delivered slower, and the millionaire joke has potential but needs some fixing…

Friday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhWdhHThjZg

0m44s I should’ve done the “boop boop” back at the audience member here

1m12s My attitude isn’t sad enough here

2m11s There were literally thirty guys to stage right

3m03s This is where the set starts to go off the wheels

3m26s That was the weirdest start of a laugh with an instant stop I’ve ever heard

5m18s The guy had a neon green shirt on, I wish I thought of this 10 seconds sooner

5m39s And this gets better

5m57s This is a shit show

6m15s Bad joke selection for a drunk, he had a good response though

6m38s That’s awesome telling him “you’re single, right?”

7m17s At least I ended it strong

Overall: This felt like a midnight show at 8pm. I had them with the facebook joke, then the j-date joke got screwed up, the russian family stuff missed and then it turned into audience disruption central. I was able to handle it pretty well (although a little slow on my comebacks), didn’t force my way back into the same joke after a disruption, and eventually managed to get through a whole joke and end on a laugh. It could’ve gone much worse.

An open mic with like 5 comics in the audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHsKTmAyKfA

0m41s Do more of a female voice

0m52s Say the “I’m not a man” line in a more husky voice

1m14s No need for the “and have I mentioned” part

1m59s Put “when I need to get my van repainted” first and then mention “which is every week”

2m57s Say “Yale” before lab technician to emphasize it

3m44s That doesn’t even make sense but it’s funny

4m16s It should be “mmm, you like photos of grown men, huh?”

4m33s This joke needs serious changing

5m01s Put more emphasis on “That’s a lot” before saying “money” under my breath

Overall: Some bits hit better than others, and most need rewriting or other adjustments

A late night music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63_noePXmGQ

0m12s I’m talking into a 1950’s style radio mic

1m52s First laugh of the set, nice!

8m41s This is my favorite punchline right now

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Ik6jDVzEEI

0m29s I could’ve thrown in, “I guess that hit a nerve”

2m10s Pause more naturally, as if I’m gonna continue the sentence

3m48s Try using the mic hand as pulling on her hair

4m58s Do the hand motion on “never”

Overall: It took a couple of minutes to get people to fully listen, but then the set went fairly well. I managed to do a fifteen minute set without busting out any “Russian mom” material, which I wanted to do just to know I can do that.