Performance Critique: May 15a

A Saturday afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TulTHW6TofI

2m10s Do the phone camera part sooner

2m55s I like the pause and going to more fast paced call backs of “blurry blurry dark dark”

3m40s I can stop saying “page” sooner and just count numbers

4m15s Don’t smile or laugh, fully commit to the bit

4m50s At least I’m having fun

Overall: I did a five minute long joke and stayed committed to it even when it wasn’t hitting so well. Pulling out the phone and taking a photo is funny and I should do that sooner.

Performance Critique: May 14

A check spot on a Friday night

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IT5yJdVJMJ0

2m04s Saying I’ll be flirting with the girls makes the guys pay attention

4m50s I can probably get rid of “the eucharist” part

Overall: This was really solid for a check spot. The audience was noisy for a little bit but I got them paying attention and laughing as soon as they finished paying bills.

Performance Critique: May 12

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKvbyJWT9BY

0m23s No need to say the expectations line

0m42s This starts off a little too angry, I need to change the setup

1m55s I need to get the audience on my side for the whole photo bit, make the person showing me photos more annoying

2m41s This is one reason I still go to open mics, better to mess up here than a real show

3m53s Don’t say the word “joke”

4m14s Get rid of the seconds parts and the photo op part

5m05s Don’t say “joke”

7m03s But my hand lower so it doesn’t cover my face

7m29s Someone started with “what’s his name” so I “yes and-ed” it

Overall: The photo joke needs a lot of work at the start of it, and I need to stop saying the word “joke” in my act

Performance Critique: May 11

MCing my bar show in Queens

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6uTBFmfa2RM

0m54s After “I never go anywhere” throw in “I just sit at this bar all day”

2m43s Usually I’d say I’m going too fast, but MCing and being at a bar show, you need to go fast or everyone is guaranteed to zone out

3m53s Don’t go back to the photo joke after a long interruption

5m14s Get more excitable and energetic during “grainy grainy dune dune”

6m23s It was a comic

8m40s This is called powering thru

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zVK8dPSlIXc

0m56s Don’t say the word “deli” twice in a row

Overall: I was able to stay energetic and more or less positive while being mostly ignored by the bar patrons, so this was a good exercise in powering through.

My 48 Hour Film Project Movie

Last weekend I participated in the 48 Hour Film Project in NYC. Basically, each team gets 48 hours to write, film, edit and submit a 4 to 7 minute film. You draw a genre and are then given a prop, a line of dialogue and a character name and have to work it all into your movie.

We had:
Genre: “Film De Femme” (strong female character)
Prop: Tennis Ball
Dialogue: “Are you sure?”
Character: Ethan St John, President of ___

I proudly present our movie, “Margot”:
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1G09Enl81ck

Our creative process was:

Friday 10pm – 1am: 8 people shooting around ideas for a film, agreeing on an idea then story arcing it

Saturday 1am – 3am: 5 of us who were going to be writing and acting in it and the director wrote a first draft

Saturday 3am – 5am: 3 of us wrote a second draft while sending everyone else to sleep

Saturday 7am: Start setting up for filming and cast the roles, go through the second draft and make additional changes with the whole team

Saturday 9am: PA’s, PM’s and DP show up

Saturday 11am – 11pm: Film the different scenes

Saturday 11pm – Sunday 10am: Edit the first cut

Sunday 10am to 1pm: Give notes on the first cut and re-edit

Sunday 1pm to 7pm: Fix up the sound, make final touch ups, export and submit the film

I wound up not acting in it, which was okay with me because there was so many other things for me to do. I wound up sleeping 5 hours in two nights.

My favorite part of this is how 5 comedians came together and wrote a dark movie that has very little comedy in it…

Last thought: I highly recommend everyone pick a “48 Hour Challenge” where you have 48 hours to complete a task that would otherwise take a really long time (write a short book, make a music album, paint ten paintings, etc). You’d be surprised at how efficient you can be when you’re on the clock.

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