Category: Comedy

Friday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dTgVyCnLZvI

0m55s Pause another second before “maybe”

2m43s Don’t add “the wine”

5m11s Instead of “do that” say “make a website like that for”

6m46s Funny improvised statement

7m36s The biggest laugh was when it wasn’t material

7m56s Checking getting dropped towards the end of my set

Overall: Decent but not great. It started out stronger than it ended.

A show at a Hostel, with a mostly international crowd

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wxczhuX69Q

3m55s I need a different end to this joke

4m16s I don’t need to verify this that much

7m53s Milk the “eye fucking” line for longer

Overall: Solid set, but the Jewel joke isn’t getting enough laughs throughout the bit.

An afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Yz6GK_vGIc

1m35s I didn’t set up this joke enough, it doesn’t make sense

4m14s Not sure if that’s too far

4m22s At least I admit it

Overall: Considering how bad this open mic usually goes, this was respectable. I tried some newer jokes in the middle, they have promise but need work.

An 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HscDhRf2acw

0m14s The previous act stripped down to his boxers so I addressed it

1m13s Say it more seductively

1m23s Never good when I gotta use this line this early

1m29s If I use the save line, I shouldn’t continue the same joke

2m39s Instead of “her” say “my mom”

5m47s First time I’m doing this joke on a weekend in prime time

7m39s Weak laugh

Overall: Not a great set, I had a laughs throughout but there was only one laugh where the whole room laughed together and that’s not acceptable

A 6pm show with about 10 audience members

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3z8pBnqS8M8

0m48s I need to have my head facing straight ahead when doing the mouth drop

2m08s My good improvised lines always get bigger laughs than my best jokes, I need to deliver my best jokes how I deliver my improvised lines

5m32s Someone else made fun of him before

7m08s Hold out the dollar bills higher in the air

Overall: Not great, not atrocious. I need to force myself and trust myself to improvise more often in my sets, as that gets the biggest laughs