Category: Comedy

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6b2Xq4Umh_A

1m35s Either say “Rock and Roll” or “Heavy Metal” not both

3m03s Make an erasing the chalk board motion

3m24s The word “lie” should be last in the sentence

4m28s I need to say “comedy” before “class”

Overall: Decent for an open mic

Hosting my show in Queens

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GhI0PWqYLUU

3m12s Everyone turned their head so I had to call it out

4m16s Don’t say “If I wasn’t hosting I would…”

4m45s So creepy it’s funny

5m28s Get rid of the word “really” in there

5m43s Don’t say “terrible” in two examples in a row

7m29s Too wordy of a punch line

8m14s Throw in a “clap it up for young love” or something

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdy2rk2HIRw

0m18s Working too hard for an answer that’s not even needed for the joke

2m56s Put the word “lie” last

3m22s Pick three of the four

Overall: Mediocre hosting. I could’ve done more crowd work and been higher energy.

Hosting a Monday show in a restaurant

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8ytdCMi6pY

0m28s Or gifts

5m40s Oppressor football is a funny statement

7m33s I didn’t handle the interruption as smoothly as possible

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DORA2pAA9aI

Overall: I could’ve been had more energy as the MC, but I did a good job engaging them

Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WHhSH75ERAM

0m20s Awkward pauses are funny

0m40s Instead of “do a joke about this” say “talk about this on stage”

0m58s Say “send guys to Ben’s new camp”, I missed “guys” in that setup

1m34s Don’t do the baby spleen crack analogy, HD TV is stronger

2m35s I need to start this joke with almost getting run over by a jogger

2m53s Make it more of a rock song than a rap song

Overall: Worked out some newer jokes, some have potential but they need more work

Saturday 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTkaiiPRYAA

2m42s Get rid of “the wine”

2m46s Don’t make “would you let Jesus shave you?” into a question, make it into a statement

3m41s Just say “I’ll wave my hand till you laugh”

4m10s I can stop after “weight of failed expectations” no need for “for son”

4m39s Not a strong enough of a punch

6m20s Need a better punch than “straight jacket”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7j7FMkcdSk

Overall: Good ten minute set, especially since I’m still figuring out a bunch of these jokes.