Another open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z_1JQnEWczQ
2m38s No need for the third “I believe you”
3m50s No need to say “How do you think I felt?” unless the crowd groans
4m05s Hit each of those two lines harder and separately
Overall: As good as a mic can get: I got an applause break at an open mic, which is rarer than seeing a unicorn.
The worst open mic in the city
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7_XSayvZU8
1m02s If people at an open mic don’t laugh at the host getting made fun of, nothing will hit
2m18s Get rid of “of son”
4m12s Say “it’s not like you said you”
Overall: Ehh. Worked out new versions of older jokes.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bsU5x347rBg
0m52s Changed “acted” to “actor”
2m32s And now it’s really awkward
3m53s Get rid of “that was when”
Overall: Mostly working out newer material. The TiVo relationship joke needs work.
A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QLjwuzu6RM0
0m22s That would’ve been hysterical if I hit the line right away
4m33s This joke needs to be MUCH shorter
4m43s Change “disliking” to “hating”
6m23s Wow this joke is still going? Even I zoned out watching it back
7m01s True story
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FgHS95FvEjc
2m39s Change “prom dress” to “duct tape”
Overall: Eh. That six minute sand joke REALLY needs to be shorter. I could barely watch it and I wrote it.
Headlining my Queens bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtqN9mqqxVg
1m06s Start shaking hands before starting to talk
2m16s Good improvised line
3m34s Change meth to crack
5m54s I need better examples
6m03s Good callback to the improvised waterfalls line
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOKFwCH25tg
0m35s I love that the jokes are hit or miss but the crowd work is on
2m23s I forgot to say “about me making money”
3m03s Rephrase “glamour gods wanna know”
3m55s Good callback
4m15s If only my jokes went over as well as this stuff
8m34s That’s messed up but funny
Overall: Good job interacting with the crowd and making lots of callbacks to organic things that happened during the set.
