A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gk513_b0KeA
0m51s Maybe I should open my normal set with this joke
1m50s Slow down on the photo taking part
4m48s Needs a stronger end
Overall: Good for a mic but the multimillionaire and coldstone jokes need stronger endings
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Llg3nmHO7_w
0m24s Say she upset me
0m37s Reword to “If you hadn’t said it”
2m58s Funnier story than it is stand up material
5m14s Try not to do twenty seconds of stalling
Overall: Nothing special
My Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AKaDKAOHQM
5m15s Say it like it’s more obvious
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_t0eLnwnRHU
0m57s That’s funny even if they didn’t think so
Overall: I should’ve done more crowd work as they weren’t going for the material
Doing a late night spot after the real show ends for audience members that stick around
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qtQ1JoVJV3Q
3m14s Make a better joke if I’m gonna address random audience locations
3m34s It should be “another ton” not “ton”
5m10s Don’t say “cook” twice
6m59s If they didn’t go for the Netflix joke, they won’t go for the Yelp joke
Overall: I started stronger than I ended
Hosting the Sunday writers mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qaCHD9yP2Dg
2m32s This applause break needs to happen within a minute of this joke, not in two and half minutes.
3m37s Hold out the phone for longer
Overall: Slow down on the photo joke and get to the Jewel punchline quicker.
