A hostel show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rO6JmKe38rQ
2m08s If they’re this dead, I should just start talking to them and stop doing material
4m31s When that gets nothing, it’s gonna be a long set
6m20s I should’ve already asked them, “Do any of you speak English”
Overall: This is as bombing as it gets. I should’ve gone into crowd work after the first few jokes didn’t hit instead of plowing through.
Sunday Writer’s Mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FryLt4xQpSY
1m00s Say “if” in both sentences “if you hadn’t said it” and “if it hadn’t been for the…”
2m06s Get rid of “he steal whole movie”
3m32s Get rid of one of the four examples
Overall: Working out some stuff
The Saturday night show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWU22ns6tS0
3m06s I like when they groan at this part, but need to think of a way to acknowledge it
3m53s Don’t move side to side this much
7m59s Cut the Chekhov thing
Overall: Good but not great.
A Friday night show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bbniYblKJKE
2m12s When going back to a joke from an interruption, repeat the last sentence or last few words of the previous sentence first.
3m09s Knock more authoritatively
3m20s Don’t hesitate
5m32s Say it more nonchalantly
5m42s Good awareness of time
6m09s Yelp wasn’t explained well
Overall: I got thrown by the constant talking and while I addressed it and got laughs it was still distracting
A hostel show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1RXIEPSljqs
3m25s Get rid of “for son”
4m58s That’s funny
5m28s The “I see you eye fucking me” should be more random, not after “I gotta leave you guys”
Overall: I should’ve talked to them more as the material wasn’t hitting
