Category: Comedy

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGydzzUF3qc

0m32s More examples needed

1m59s I actually don’t like it

4m13s Don’t swivel side to side like that

5m55s These are all B laughs in a very strong set (up to this point), so this joke should be cut or fixed

8m31s Sound crazier on the act out

Part 2 – which I forgot to color correct

1m03s Try doing Yelp before Netflix and combine both into one joke/concept

2m56s I look very relaxed for having no idea what joke I’m gonna do next

3m30s Point before saying “this clip”

Overall: Extremely solid 14 minute set. Some jokesdidn’t hit as hard as others but I kept the audience with me the whole time.

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C9eLTMf1PHM

0m48s Say “the remote control” not “a remote control”

2m47s Cut this part of the joke

Overall: Decent for a mic. The Facebook official joke has potential but needs to be reworked

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CO5EVKStOA

1m08s Tease her more for not knowing who that is

2m35s This is the longest I’ve gone without starting with material, I should try this more often

4m18s Say it’s a bad thing for a girl, not a guy

5m01s Cut the pink umbrella

6m15s Cut this part of the joke

7m12s Make this part more surprising

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mt9Pe5HRtSU

9m09s Make it an air quote instead of throwing up my hand randomly

Part 3

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwSbx2wwNv4

Overall: I was nice and conversational and didn’t rush any of the material.

The worst mic in the city

1m16s Neurocomedy as a punch line doesn’t fix the joke

2m34s Don’t put the emphasis on “kinda” put it on “cool”

3m50s Cut the last part of this joke starting from “comedian is where I fit in”

4m45s For the NYTimes try “cause I used to be a junkie and all I did was read”

5m42s I could’ve thrown in, “I’m gonna put my foot up your neuro ass”

Overall: This isn’t the worst this mic has gone