A third mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRqBvRw1q_s
0m57s The “What are you up to?” doesn’t fit
3m20s Pause a little longer after this one
Overall: Working out the same jokes a few times in one night, they still need work
Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B987Y_jHzME
0m43s Change “rough” to “tough”
1m34s Cut the genre part
3m04s Sell the “I’m gonna fast forward this” more
3m59s Get rid of the “I know that intellectually” part
4m26s Cut the Kant joke
5m23s This joke needs a stronger end
Overall: Decent. These jokes could use some trimming though.
The worst mic in the city
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FcAPXRM8R9w
0m33s At a dead mic, the best shot at laughs or at least getting people to listen is commenting on previous comic’s material
2m31s Say “you can pay for this, right?” instead of “you got this, right?”
2m48s Do the sound effect right after I say “fast forward” for the first time
5m29s Word this better
Overall: Stage time is stage time, or so I keep telling myself.
Going up last at a small show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=–7-9pokV60
2m42s Commit to the extra modeling poses harder
8m38s Get rid of the philosophy gambling line
Overall: Decent considering the show had been going on for more than two hours, the audio isn’t great here cause of the air conditioning
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wHJX_LBQZFw
0m53s Add in a “cause” before “it’s not stealing”
1m58s The “what are you guys up to later?” doesn’t make sense here, sell the flirting more if I’m gonna do it
3m21s Cut this act out
4m10s Cut the gambling on philosophers part
5m23s Cut the last part of this joke
6m00s Reword to “unless it’s physical contact”
Overall: I tried out a bunch of newer jokes, they need work.
