Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lW1-cgefuQ
0m31s I butchered Shawn White’s last name
0m58s I didn’t sell how horrible I felt it was
1m16s Cut the science donation part
Overall: Working out some new jokes, they need work
The 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lW1-cgefuQ
1m56s Put more emphasis on “Berlin Wall”
3m00s Look the same way for the second pose
4m06s Great in the moment response
5m58s Stepped on a laugh, slow down
Overall: Solid but I need to slowdown on the Netflix joke
A 8PM Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33r0hHwWZ-k
0m24s Say “Hi Girls” then pause then say the line
2m09s Add on to it with “do a line in the bathroom”
3m03s Milk the modeling for longer
4m56s Change “All I did” to “All you do”
6m10s Sell the dodging around more
7m28s Good save
Overall: I lost them on the last two jokes. The “you were no accident” joke needs fixing.
A 6:30 PM Show for a crowd of 10-15
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7DHjjqLzV4
0m22s After throwing my hand up, turn to the other side of the audience while holding the “what the hell?” look
2m34s Look at the same person while striking poses
3m06s Change it back to “Jesus wants you to…”
4m27s Change my voice for him
5m49s Change it “so it’s worth it”
Overall: Solid for the size of the audience but I could’ve ended a stronger.
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mTef1iWyc0
0m49s And this one liner is officially retired
4m47s Cut the “donate to science” parts
5m16s Keep my gaze in one place after that punch line
7m29s Only do one food reference, then make the second one something else
Overall: Decent enough for an open mic
