Category: Comedy

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BdQYUTWXm8

1m40s I hadn’t been on stage for two days, so I decided to do my “A” jokes just to warm up

3m32s Call them out on homophobia

Overall: Decent for a mic

Hosting my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u3KY1a_np0

0m34s Go into the “I’m not sure what my tattoo means” for longer

1m15s Mimic her pronunciation and see if she says everything in that accent or just her name

1m58s Try changing this to “I’m hitting MY goal 100% of the time”

4m22s I haven’t asked the audience any questions yet

7m05s I should’ve started with addressing the environment

7m58s Do different poses

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jc6Lkmpw0vc

1m14s I notice I’m not higher energy than I usually am, and I need to be when hosting

2m18s Doing time between comics

3m02s Cut the clip to wall line

4m00s All my improvised lines are getting bigger laughs than the material, so I should improvise more, especially when hosting

6m18s Great call back

8m15s Nice try getting the couple to stop sucking face

8m56s Rework the first two lines of the shoes joke

Overall: Not great but not terrible. I need to go way higher in my energy and delivery when hosting.

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUHXahFZQSs

0m38s I might want to turn the last thirty seconds into a one liner about spelling ineligible

1m45s The line should’ve been “easy to service”

2m17s The second part of that joke is too blue

Overall: Working out new jokes, they need work

The 8PM Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCdH_po2wOY

0m21s Better to ask “really, that’s an O?” instead of telling them

1m03s Rephrase to “that means four years of your life weren’t flushed down the toilet”

2m42s Put more emphasis on “freezing”

3m28s I should’ve added one more comment

4m45s Get rid of “your”

Overall: Good but not great set, the Netflix joke went really well to close.

A 6PM Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rH82Tc–p7Q

0m58s Put the emphasis on “your” and try putting “flush” towards the end of the sentence

Overall: A very average, very short set.