Category: Comedy

Going first at a music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m6qm6uxXzO4

0m59s Get from x games to ford focus in way less time

2m00s Change the tequila shots tag

3m07s Change Halo to coffee or something

6m05s Talk to them a little bit instead of going into another joke, especially when a couple in a row haven’t really hit

7m06s Should’ve acknowledged this two minutes earlier

8m28s I could’ve done more with that “it used to be twenty”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f9b6Ozbscks

Overall: I lost the crowd early on and never got them back. It didn’t help that I wanted to do mostly newer/less polished jokes.

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ki6ai9d2IV8

1m48s Cut the NFL Draft Room reference or make it clearer

2m18s Do a driving motion during this act out

Overall: That voting joke at the start has potential but needs work

Doing a set at my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edvQpKoJAoY

1m19s Since Halo isn’t crucial to the joke, pick something else that everyone has waited online for

2m16s Make this sentence clearer

3m35s Change the spreadsheet and winning formula lines

8m42s What I just said should’ve gone after “businessman” ten seconds later

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jlt1DxBtVC4

0m25s Only do “and nobody believes me” twice, not three times

2m05s After “pause” say “Ben” before saying “I didn’t get you anything”

3m19s Change “you’re not funny” to “I don’t appreciate your jokes”

Overall: Eh, slightly below average but the crowd work up front was good.

Late night, two plus hours into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Y1jkWsZXDk

2m22s It took them an extra second to get it, good job waiting for it

3m52s Acknowledge the “cmon”

3m57s I need a better way to go into this joke

4m51s Face the audience during the act out

5m21s Use different hands for me and Sandeep

Overall: Great set, especially considering how much comedy the crowd had heard by that point. Of course, there’s still some adjustments to be made.

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hqtt08jXmjQ

2m14s Change notch and the winning formula lines

2m48s Change neuro-habitate to something else

3m05s Try “cause I used to sell THEM fake…”

5m25s This joke still isn’t working

7m09s I can try going straight to, “No Nick, since I unfriended you, I don’t have to pay rent, cause you’re not Facebook official” or something like that

8m47s Say “talked about” instead of “did this”

Overall: Decent for a mic but I need to figure out the mobile adoption center joke.