A 6pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=55l9V5mNg78
1m13s I’m talking way too fast
2m22s I should talk and observe the crowd at the beginning of my sets, that seems to get a good response
3m35s Slow down
4m02s Acknowledge a girl getting excited about my hookup schedule and say I can pencil her in
5m58s Make a couple more jokes at the gasp, or interact with her
6m27s Add in “but I’m gonna do it anyway”
Overall: Mediocre but decent ending. I should’ve tried talking to them a little more.
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6PgcAs5QQE
3m57s I should’ve just stuck with the messed up wording instead of rephrasing
6m31s This setup feels forced and robotic, I need to make it more conversational
8m29s Hit that “open source” punch line harder
9m04s Find something funnier than “neuro athlete”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=reZmpKXKlNg
Overall: Kinda mediocre, I got laughs throughout, but not a lot of huge laughs. The biggest laughs were improvised lines, and I look like I could be having more fun.
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEeeACUU5sg
1m22s End this joke after the open source line
2m40s Make more jokes about the pool argument
3m28s That’s a funny mess up
4m35s I need to find an actual place for the phrase “The clouds are shining”
5m22s Say “but I don’t wanna” not “but I won’t”
5m37s Give better examples after racially profile
Overall: Tried some new jokes and managed to have fun at a mic
A mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ahv-6ztCgJA
1m16s No need for the fake boobs line
1m48s Kill the spreadsheet and winning formula tags
4m08s It’s not clear that she’s clicking a mouse button, probably better to make it a photo album
4m42s Say “oh look, it’s real live sand”
4m59s Show more surprise on that one
Overall: Eh, just working stuff out at a mic.
A show for 10-12 people at a bowling alley
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UnOBcZITpDY
0m14s That was a reference to something the host said, but it was five minutes before he brought me up, so it didn’t make sense anymore
1m19s Look at the same person when starting this, so it looks like I was just continuing their student loan conversation
3m51s Hit the mom lines harder
6m14s This needs a smoother intro
8m22s I need to change “prompt service” to something else, it consistently gets minimum laughs
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L3wCR0F1lvQ
0m20s Change the “notch on my spreadsheet”
0m37s Keep looking at the same person for the second line of “all I know is…”
Overall: Mediocre to averageish, I lost them in the middle of the set for a bit and could’ve done a little more crowd work.
