Category: Comedy

A music mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gbhvjHuTxII

4m38s I need to figure out a way to get the math line into a different joke

5m09s Too unrealistic to get a laugh

5m18s At least I can bring them back after a new joke that isn’t working yet

6m58s Instead of “did this” say “talked about this”

8m12s Make a clearer bar chart

9m02s Make a pistol shooting motion

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5trqnewPTUc

1m39s Don’t do the second part if they don’t laugh at “perfect” I should know this by now, and this is a reason to no longer have this be my closing joke.

2m47s Instead of “she” say “Jenny”

Overall: Started strong, lost them on a new joke, brought them back, lost them again, brought them back, then lost them for the last two minutes.

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JdTcLptLbPI

4m19s I need a little more set up for this joke

5m16s Cut this line

5m28s At least I’m able to bring the crowd back

6m13s Try saying, “the tight ones don’t groan… sorry to give away your secret…”

7m45s Make a better remote control

9m10s I shouldn’t go for the second part if they don’t laugh at “perfect”

Overall: I lost the crowd twice but was able to bring them back twice. It’s better not to lose the crowd at all, but it’s good to know I can bring them back.

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TXyFh-uaGTk

1m57s It’s not clear I’m flipping through a photo album

4m08s Watching the tape it feels like nobody is listening to me, and I should’ve called it out by now

Overall: One of “those” open mics.

Doing a regular set at my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-Ann0zm86E

2m05s This transition makes no sense after the previous interaction which I didn’t finish off, so it makes full sense that the joke failed

2m59s The hotel interior should be part of her voice

7m03s No need for the second “I know”

8m09s I should’ve gone into my “if only one person laughs, we’ve found the real serial killer” line after that low reaction

9m37s Mean but funny

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=odLOgov6UnM

Overall: I tried out a bunch of unpolished jokes up front and some went better than others. Not a great set, but I gotta do unfinished jokes somewhere.

Late night after the show has been going for 2.5+ hours

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1O5NrMxJDZQ

0m20s I look really fat from the side, work on my posture

1m33s Take longer pauses between each phrase

2m02s I’m flying through my mom’s act outs, which is why the laughs aren’t there

5m46s Smile a little bit while saying that

Overall: Decent especially considering how long they’d been there, but the suicide joke hasn’t been hitting as hard lately.